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This story takes place in a futuristic world. Two, in fact. The first of these worlds is the Earth we know and love, where human technology has advanced beyond our wildest imaginations. Sadly, our technological successes were still no match against natural space disasters, namely meteor apocalypse.

When a stray, planet-sized space rock decided to pass through the asteroid belt, it bumped a few thousand meteors out of orbit. It was only a matter of time before the lethal projectiles were discovered on their one-way track to Earth, and seeing no way to destroy the threat, humanity decided to flee from it.

Their voyage took them to our second planet, a verdant, fertile land they christened Alternia. At first things went well for the new settlers as they began to deforest and excavate the land to fit their needs, but as time went on it became apparent to the humans that the native fauna weren't too happy about their activity.

The Lusiian, which was the name given to classify all the alien animals, were a unique form of life. Unlike the animals from old Earth, every lusus was stark white with green eyes, yet their blood could come in a rainbow of colors. They came in all shapes and sizes, but the most fascinating, and most dangerous, aspect of the Lusii was their unimaginable power.

The settlers took to calling it the Green Lightning, which was appropriately fitting. If a lusus was attacked or angered it would undeniably annihilate the threat with a bolt of green energy. Another lethal skill of theirs was the ability to manipulate matter and space. Many a human would mysteriously vanish in the presence of a lusus, only to be discovered weeks later- dead.

At this the humans began to retaliate. They knew it was futile to fight the unholy menace, so instead they went on the defensive. After years of failed attempts and numerous more casualties, the settlers managed to succeed in building a shield impenetrable by all things solid and of high energy with their vast knowledge. But this shield was like a two-sided coin. While it managed to keep Lusii out, the humans were also trapped in and this created new problems of their own.

Desperate for the need of expansion the humans once again began looking for a solution to keep their Lusiian enemies at bay. This time their answer would attempt to take the Lusii's power and turn it against them in a form of hybrid-human race whose sole purpose would be to be used as living weapons of war.

And this is where our story begins.
:icondoodlefox:
Your DNA is 51% animal. You are more animal than human, therefore you are not human. Because you are not human you are not entitled to the same rights and privileges as them, nor are we required to treat you like one.

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This is also on AO3: [link]
And FanFiction.net: [link]

Just a Homestuck Fan Fiction I've been working on. Partly inspired by the book Maximum Ride. It'll be mostly about Jade, Dave, Dirk, Rose and a few Trolls.

Feel free to point out any gramatical or spelling errors, or if you have any tips on making the characters sound more like "them".

I really want illustrations to go along with the AO3 version. If you're interested and feel up to the challenge, please note me. I'll try to respond as promptly as I can.
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~giratinium May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, following this on AO3 right now.
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:iconthealmightye:
This is really interesting so far. I hope you continue. :)
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~DoodleFox May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I sure am gonna try. I've already got one act of.... Lord knows how many, done and am currently writing the second, and I hope to have another part out soon.

I have a general sense of where I want to take this, but no idea how to get there, so I'm just making it up as I go along.
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:iconthealmightye:
That's okay. That's how I am with a LOT of my stories when I write. :)
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